Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
In
this
modern era, like everything is changing, the thought process of youngsters is nowhere behind, as they are highly focused on working for themselves rather than burning the oil to help their employers to earn revenues. Linking Words
Firstly
, we will be discussing its causes and Linking Words
secondly
, we will explain the repercussions of being an entrepreneur.
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To begin
with, nowadays every human being is suffering numerous kinds of societal, family or financial pressure and zero work-life balance adds fuel to the fire. Linking Words
Additionally
, regardless of late-night workings and making their life hell, efficient employees don't get promotions and bonuses, which pushes them to re-think their decision of continuing the job. Linking Words
Furthermore
, everybody knows that owners earn better than their employees. Linking Words
For instance
, I was working in a mortgage company and used to work for 10 hours every day, whereas, freelancers who were sourcing files for us, were earning 5 times higher than me deploying less effort. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is evident that it takes several months or years to stabilise in own venture, but rapid growth and satisfaction are the factors that drive everybody to do their own start-up.
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On the other hand
, being a businessman carries some drawbacks as well, Linking Words
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,
it involves huge investment costs and requires a gestation period Remove the comma
apply
to begin
the production. Linking Words
Moreover
, there is always uncertainty attached to it. Linking Words
For example
, Covid was a dreadful situation for every employer, as they had to pay salaries to their employees and rent to the property owners, without generating a single rupee revenue for a couple of months. Linking Words
Thus
, it is clearly a concept of the higher the risk, the higher return.
To conclude, undeniably, a large number of youth is focusing on commencing their own venture Linking Words
instead
of working for others because they can see the potential in their ideas. Linking Words
However
, there are some risks attached to it, which surely needs to be taken into consideration before jumping on Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...