Traditional food is undergoing great changes and being replaced by new diets. What do you think are the reasons and what do you think about this phenomenon?

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and dynamic society. The question here is whether why there

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tendency of changing and

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traditional food

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might come from changes in human lifestyle, and

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phenomenon may have advantages. On the one hand, there is a number of factors explaining why

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of life might contribute to the changes

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traditional foods.

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of works nowadays might involve

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the differentiation of timetable compared to the past.

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, a recent survey has shown that urban citizens have a tendency to consume fast foods

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of home-cooked

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for trying to get the large number of tasks done early before going home, which produces more

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alternative

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as canned foods.

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, healthier lifestyles may prompt people to eat

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diets.

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, there will be more

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for traditionally dietary consumption.

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of new edibles would bring benefits to

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society. On the individual level,

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plays an essential role

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boosting employees’ performance by the less time-consuming property. On the macro level, the more the governments prioritize the importance of a well-balanced diet in educational programs, the more the citizens will reduce the high risk of fatal diseases.

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, the nations would be alleviated pressure from allocating budget for health care. In conclusion, not only do new

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act as a wake-up call for health problems, but it

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makes people have

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lifestyle. As a consequence,

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people will expand their lifespan.