Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

it has been argued that

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self-satisfaction work is much

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necessary

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secure employment.

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, others oppose

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and

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a stable

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have

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more importance in a person`s

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. in my perspective,

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think it depends upon an individual`s choice, but according to

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me

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satisfaction

give

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us happiness and joy in our

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upcoming paragraphs,

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will

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discuss

my viewpoints briefly.

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with, many people prefer that kinds of

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which give them pleasure, happiness and relax from stress and tensions. to explain

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, if a man or woman do work according to his/her wish, s/he will never feel bored for their

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, my friend before was working in an office, she was not happy with her

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because of her officer`s behaviour and colleagues as well.

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true the

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was secure,but she always suffered from stress , tensions and different negative thoughts. later she quit the

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and joined a small business, according to her choice, now whenever

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meet with her, she always seems very satisfied enjoy

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with her family.

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other

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side,

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, always helps in critical situations, if something happened wrong.to cite an

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example

for

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, recently, by

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a computer got damaged by my brother, he was in tension about that mishappening and thought he had to pay all

exepenses

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expenses

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paid for everything.

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helps in

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of problems. in the opposition,many people claim that stable work

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have

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more importance as

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to other jobs.

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,

permanent

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a permanent

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give

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relief from unemployment as

less

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chances to get fired from that

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as in

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satisfied

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satisfying

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or

secure

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the boss can easily ask to quit the

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.

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permanent

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the permanent

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is

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also

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runs for long term or long time period, even

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passes to the generation.

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, in India if

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army man became

martyr

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, the authority pass the

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to his son.

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,

less

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chances of getting

lose

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the

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.

in addition

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, finding a self-

satisfication

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satisfaction

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is a daunting task and need

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enough time to search

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. in conclusion, it has been noticed that

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every

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have its own importance, it

depend

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upon a person`s wish what kind of

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s/he wants to pursue in their

life

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. but in

opinion

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my opinion

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, self-

satifaction

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satisfaction

is more important for a

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and happy

life

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. as mostly

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gives stress,tensions and burden.