it has been argued that
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self-satisfaction work is much
than
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secure employment.
however
, others oppose
this
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and
saidWrong verb form
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a stable
job
haveChange the verb form
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more importance in a person`s
life
. in my perspective,
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think it depends upon an individual`s choice, but according to
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job
satisfaction
giveChange the verb form
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us happiness and joy in our
life
. in
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upcoming paragraphs,
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will
my viewpoints briefly.
to begin
with, many people prefer that kinds of
job
which give them pleasure, happiness and relax from stress and tensions. to explain
this
,
firstly
, if a man or woman do work according to his/her wish, s/he will never feel bored for their
job
.
for example
, my friend before was working in an office, she was not happy with her
job
because of her officer`s behaviour and colleagues as well.
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true the
job
was secure,but she always suffered from stress , tensions and different negative thoughts. later she quit the
job
and joined a small business, according to her choice, now whenever
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meet with her, she always seems very satisfied enjoy
life
with her family.
furthermore
,
on
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side,
secureCorrect article usage
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job
, always helps in critical situations, if something happened wrong.to cite an
for
this
, recently, by
a computer got damaged by my brother, he was in tension about that mishappening and thought he had to pay all
for that, but
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paid for everything.
hence
,
secureAdd an article
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job
helps in
such
kindFix the agreement mistake
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of problems.
in the opposition,many people claim that stable work
job
haveChange the verb form
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more importance as
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to other jobs.
firstly
,
permanentCorrect article usage
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job
giveChange the verb form
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relief from unemployment as
lessChange the quantifier
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chances to get fired from that
job
as in
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satisfiedReplace the word
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job
or
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job
the boss can easily ask to quit the
job
.
secondly
,
permanentAdd an article
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job
is Change the verb form
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also
runs for long term or long time period, even
also
passes to the generation.
for instance
, in India if
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army man became
martyrCorrect article usage
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, the authority pass the
job
to his son.
as a result
,
lessChange the quantifier
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chances of getting
loseChange the form of the verb
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the
job
.
in addition
, finding a self-
job
is a daunting task and need
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enough time to search
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job
.
in conclusion, it has been noticed that
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every
job
have its own importance, it
dependChange the verb form
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upon a person`s wish what kind of
job
s/he wants to pursue in their
life
. but in
opinionCorrect pronoun usage
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, self-
is more important for a
job
and happy
life
. as mostly
job
gives stress,tensions and burden.