With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

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In the modern urban expansion of the cities, means of circulating and habitat are becoming two of the most problematic issues. some think to solve
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problem
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we should move to the suburbs or rural
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. others argue that
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only brings chaos to the villages and is not a good solution. my opinion stands closer to the former statement.
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with, most of the
traffic
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in urban cities are formed because of the density of the business in a place,meaning that the
traffic
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goes wherever the business goes so changing its location not only does not solve the
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of
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and pollution it
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makes other
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polluted and unhabitable.
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due to the high density of factories and offices in Malard (one of the rural places near Tehran) the air pollution and
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is a huge
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.
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, it takes more energy and budget to provide social transport for rural places as they are
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away from the metropolitan and every material should be transported. to make it more tangible, in a country like Iran where the economic and industrial growth is mainly happening in the capital, everything goes to Tehran
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and
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it's transported to other places. in the sense of habitat and living, cities are the primitive locations of every new technology, service and facility so if one wants to live a modern lifestyle, rural
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are not going to be a good choice. meaning that by bringing the business and workers to urban
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life quality of the employees would drop immediately and it would take time to provide all the facilities and services they need.
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, New-Shoustar is a city made for the accommodation of the workers of the oil industry in Shush but most of the workers left
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city after a while because of lack of service or just because they were away from their relatives. to sum up, it seems like urbanism can bring a number of issues including, accommodation and transport but the answer to it can not be found in the rural
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and it may even worsen the
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Alleviates
  • Economical benefits
  • Environmental conservation
  • Work-life balance
  • Urban congestion
  • Infrastructure limitations
  • Rural gentrification
  • Cultural heritage preservation
  • Green spaces
  • Skilled workforce
  • Decentralization
  • Sustainable development
  • Telecommuting
  • Rural revitalization
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