Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believed that having more police on the streets is the best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays
crime
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is increasing with each passing day. Some people believe that one
way
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of eradicating
crime
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is if we have more police on-road and streets. I partially agree with it as there are some other ways too to reduce the
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rate.
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, we will be discussing some ideas.
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, It is a good idea to have more
cops
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on the streets if we want to decrease the
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rate which will somehow create fear in minds of criminals as
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work is to reduce and stop
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as well as maintain the safety and security of cities and ways.
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in
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when a person has not followed the rules of driving while he is driving a vehicle so as soon as he sees a policeman standing for checking, he gets afraid and so tries to run away because he knows that if he catches him he will have to pay fine and can
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be given punishment according to law. So, fear comes in the mind of culprits as they see
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so it is necessary to have
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on roads especially at night. Another
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of declining crimes should be strict
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and implementation of those
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at once. If we will be having severe
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so the offender will get afraid of implementing those crimes. An example of it can be rapes cases in our country
India
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as we can see that Delhi Capital of
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is considered as rape capital.
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, In other states
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too many cases are there. In
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,daily we heard thousand of cases of rapes but do we know why is there is no control over
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crime
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. The answer is because our law on rape is so weak and steady that culprits do not fear as they know criminals who have raped a girl 12 years before are still alive and some are roaming free as they have a connection with politicians. They too will
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be free after a few years of prison.
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, countries like Saudi Arabia hangs the culprit within 2 days of his
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so the percentage of rape is least there. At ,
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I just want to conclude my essay by saying that it keeping
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on roads and streets is a
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of eradicating and stopping
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but one major
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is to make some strict
laws
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and implement them as soon as possible.
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