You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: • what course are you doing now • why you are not satisfied with that course. • what course you would like to change to.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you to change my course stream. I am a
first
-semester student
of
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this
college. My enrollment number is 246968 and I am currently pursuing my degree in electronics engineering. At the time of admission, I did not
eligible
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to choose mechanical engineering which was my
first
preference due to the high cut of marks but as per memorandum number SK/PFB/236 pasted on the college's notice board, three seats are available in a mechanical stream and
first
years students of another stream are eligible to enrol in it after your permission. I am requesting you to approve my application as my
first
preference, of course, was mechanical engineering at the time of admission and kindly
also
consider my kinematics marks in my secondary education exams. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Sangha
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You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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