Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is fault of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Everything has two sides for and against and the question if
governments
are responsible for children's adiposity is not an exception. While others have an opinion that family influences much stronger on underage people. Use synonyms
This
essay discusses both views and argues that lifestyle comes from the family.
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Firstly
, some persons consider that Linking Words
governments
can control minors' obesity. It is reached by a significant decrease in the number of harmful Use synonyms
food
on sale. Children can not control and change their own habits on Use synonyms
food
. It leads to unconscious consumption of sweets and fat meals. Use synonyms
Moreover
, almost all these products are tastier than vegetables or fruits and Linking Words
this
fact especially attracts youth people. And, definitely, Linking Words
governments
have to motion the quality of Use synonyms
such
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food
and reduce its amount in shops.
But in my opinion, parents and guardians are the only individuals who can improve the situation with minors' obesity. Undoubtedly, the family gives the habits to do sports daily and eat healthy Use synonyms
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, many studies lately show that the most common reasons for children's adiposity are due to habits and lifestyle which are given by their family. Linking Words
Therefore
, only parents can improve it.
In conclusion, it is important to say that minors' overweight is one of the most relevant problems nowadays. Linking Words
Accordingly
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governments
and parents have to throw all their strength to solve Use synonyms
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harmful and hazardous society issue. Linking Words
In addition
, new generations are the future of the world so it is crucial to do everything to keep their life from harm.Linking Words
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