These days the fashion in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting Individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way

Technology
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a vital in
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different
industries
such
as
vehicle
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. It is more likely that
cars
, trucks and buses will be
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. While the new generation of
vehicles
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got some
disadvantagest
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disadvantages
disadvantage
, I believe that the advantages are far more. On the one hand,
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cars
have some drawbacks.
Firstly
, sensitive
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and technology are so expensive, so many poor countries can not
be afford
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to have
this
technology and
new
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generation of transportation would be so pricy.
Secondly
, several programs and courses should be taken into consideration by the government for raising public awareness about how they can use these
vehicles
.
Finally
, if the
governmet
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government
want to
investint
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investing
in
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cars
, they will
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about
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of businesses for drivers who earn money from driving
cars
, trucks and buses.
On the other hand
, robot drivers are highly beneficial for society. During
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decade,
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amount of the population in the capital cities have been annoyed about heavy traffics in their area which makes them tired. robot drivers improve
this
problem, people can do whatever they want during their travel
such
as reading book and magazine, listening to podcast and checking their timetable.
Furthermore
, driving would be more
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joyful
.
Moreover
, disabled humans have not had
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opportunity of driving but with
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generation of
vehicles
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they will be unlocked the dream of driving. Interestingly, with
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cars
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the rate of
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in roads
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is projected to decline significantly in the future. To conclude, in the future whole
cars
, trucks and buses will be guided by robots.
Although
it will have some drawbacks, I strongly believe that the benefits of
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vehicles
are far more.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast fashion
  • Sustainable fashion
  • Consumer behavior
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Natural resources
  • Pollution
  • Social media influences
  • Self-esteem
  • Consumerism
  • Creativity
  • Diversity
  • Economic implications
  • Exploitative labor practices
  • Ethical consumption
  • Production practices
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