The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Development in any sector is taken optimistically.
However
, some believe that purchasing on various online platforms is a threat to the local vendors as it may result in the closure of market
. But I do not accord with Add an article
the market
this
notion,
and will take both as different aspects.
There are many individuals, who do not have any idea about accessing e-commerce applications, due to illiteracy and lack of knowledge. Take labour class as an example, in India, Remove the comma
apply
blue collar
job holders Add a hyphen
blue-collar
always
afraid to access gadgets. They merely want to follow an easy approach, Add a missing verb
are always
also
they are hired on daily
wages system, which limits their budget somehow. Correct article usage
a daily
Moreover
, shops in locality always provide fresh
stock of eatables Add an article
a fresh
such
as fruits and vegetables. Majority
of elderly people do not want to change their routine of going on Correct article usage
The majority
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a walk
walk
and buying useful products. Fix the agreement mistake
walks
This
outing freshens their mind and connect
them with society, even after their retirement.
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connects
On the other hand
, online purchasing is majorly done by educated
working class, as they are busy Add an article
the educated
in
earning disposable incomes and have made their work a priority. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, after the shift of eight hours and overtime, a person will only find sometime
of relaxation Replace the word
some time
instead
of going out for
shopping. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, these websites provide plethora
of benefits including Add an article
a plethora
latest
fashion trends, different ways to pay and doorstep delivery. These all services attract youth towards them.
To conclude, growth can only lead to Correct article usage
the latest
the
success rather than Correct article usage
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harming
. It is Replace the word
harm
also
true in case
of shopping either online or from local ventures. The importance of domestic business on small scale will never fade away, as per my perception.Correct article usage
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