After getting arranged in a fraudulent marriage, Navdeep Dhillon had to deal with both financial and emotional harm. In your opinion, which of the two was more devastating to her and why? Justify your answer with 3 reasons.

It is irrefutably true that wedding plays an integral role in each and every body’s

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. As it comes with a lot of happiness as well as some complicated issues from which we experience numerous things throughout our lives. Navdeep Dhillon had to go through the pain of sham marriage after getting married which came out in monetary burden with emotional trauma.

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the burden of financial expenses would be a difficult experience for her, emotional manipulation is more painful because it plays with the mind which may increase other health problems as well. To embark with, there are a plethora of causes why she suffered emotional problems after having arranged a wedding from which the most prominent one is after catching bad stuff in her eyes just like a nightmare comes out in depression. To make it more clear, before the wedding,

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she imagined numerous beautiful dreams just like every individual but when she saw her that dreams shattered into small – small pieces just like a glass vase falls down on the floor and spreads everywhere when after passing a few time of the marriage he told her that he was tie – the – knots with her just to enter in the country to obtain Canadian citizenship, after hearing thing with the passage of every single movement push her to thought many more negative thoughts in her mind and thousands of thoughts plays with her mind mentally and she obviously thought no aim is left in her soul to live more because how much she would try, she cannot refix that broken glass vase again just like before.

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depression could make her weak and affect her every task and torture her to harm herself and maybe to

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that she would attempt suicide. Another noteworthy notion is that she cannot able to

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anyone else for the

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of her

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. To illustrate more, as we know that

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marriage is

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biggest decision in our

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from birth or from the day when a

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comes into his/her own senses is that, and with which type of a

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they want to get married and

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the one particular

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with whom they have to a share

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everything, every moment of

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, every dream, every single bite of food which collectively became into a single word

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and when that

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brakes your

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for a movement your everything is finished your whole

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destroyed

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, later you build your self again to struggle, fight with troubles, earn money and live

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of

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a

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cannot

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at all on anybody in his/her

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for sure to start up his/her business in their

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to earn money, and when they will be going to do any deal or something else they will never ever

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because the whole time they stay in worries

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will go perfectly, that will go correct without any trouble or not which will give them stress which is not good for health, apart from

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thinks hundreds of times before making any other relationship in their

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of the

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and may spend their

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struggling alone with all the ups and downs. The

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reason is that she has to struggle financially again from the

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step. In another word, how much money a girl parents earn in their whole

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, they spend in their daughter’s wedding

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dowry and

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other arrangement stuff and a girl

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gives her whole property or half for sure and

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everything whatever she has which she cannot get back everything how much she tries and which half she gets for that she has to make hundreds of rounds in the courts, at the end she has to restart everything again, build a new business again which is a bit difficult to start alone by having nothing in the hands, with broken dreams, with mentally depressed, with having strong faith issue upon that she is a girl, she has to listen

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bad talks and humiliations and stand somewhere herself in the nation. Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that for sure she has to struggle and confront numerous situations in building her business to look over her financial expenses and at some point she will succeed to become financially independent, but with the mental depression, health issues she cannot fight because when a

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’s brain level doesn’t work properly that

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not able to think properly which can kill her

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