Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

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Few

people

believe that advertisements are very successful to make consumers buy things. Many

people

think that it is a common method to attract buyers. In my opinion,

although

most of the time advertising is a good way to sell

products

sometimes it adds great value in

life

On the other hand

, companies are trying so hard to sell their

products

, that they overstate the true quality or unique functions.

For example

, some skincare

products

can have a good advertisement, but they can

also

be harmful to some

people

's skin. Corporations are trying to talk someone into buying their goods even if they do not need them.

Thus

, fewer

people

pay attention to them in the modern world.

On the other hand

, advertisements may help you to improve your

life

or make it easier.

For example

, I saw an ad on the Internet one year ago about a very interesting and inexpensive vacation to Paris for three days. I and my family love travelling,

Moreover

, we did some research and looked more into it and made reservations.

This

advertisement made my

life

happier and gave me wonderful memories. In conclusion,

although

some

people

think advertisements have a high success rate in selling

products

others believe that it is now too general a way to draw peoples attention. In my opinion, advertising is really a good way to draw peoples attention to selling

products

and sometimes it adds some great value to

life

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3Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

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