You and your colleagues want to use a company room. Write a letter to your manager and ask for permission. In your letter. Explain why you need the room. Describe which room you need and why. Tell what changes you'll need in the room.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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permission for the Company's room that I use for my data engineering project. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and working in the data science department of your corporation. I want room for my new strategy,

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task is handled by me and my team members. So, I should need a peaceful environment to complete the work.

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, I want a company's second-floor room

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fully furnished with modern equipment. We can do our activity with full concentration and without facing any problems related to noise

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lack of material.

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why, we have to need a company place.

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, all the necessary things are available there

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of a few things that should be changed in

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area like the projected screen and meeting table, during the explanation of the deal we have to need a modern projector because the old one is very small in size. All in all, the meeting table set has only 4 chairs, we ought to need a maximum of 10 chairs set. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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Consider briefly elaborating on the nature or importance of the project, so the manager gets a clearer picture of its significance.

coherence cohesion

When explaining the changes needed in the room, specify why these changes are important for the team's productivity, e.g. how the lack of chairs could disrupt the meetings.

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The letter is clearly structured with a professional tone important for formal communication.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph conveys a distinct idea making it easy to follow.

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The reasoning for requiring the specific room and the necessary changes are clearly explained.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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