In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is replacing cars. why is this the case? which development do you think this better?

In recent times,
cars
appear to be being replaced by
bicycles
while in others, the opposite trend seems to be occurring. Personally, I believe that
bicycles
are more environmentally friendly, but
cars
are an excellent alternative due to their efficiency and comfort and the advantages of
this
will be explicated
further
. The
first
and foremost reason for the flourishment of the bicycle trend is that it offers a viable answer to many of the world's environmental problems.
In other words
, no harmful gases are emitted by
bicycles
as evidently seen in the case of hazardous gases generated by automobiles that emit greenhouse gases
such
chlorofluorocarbons, carbon monoxide contributing towards global warming.
Secondly
, riding
bicycles
mitigate the issue of traffic congestion as well as contribute towards physical fitness.
For example
, there is a scheme launched by the Indian Government ' Bicycle sharing Programme as an initiative to protect the environment.
Hence
, apart from eco-friendly
bicycles
also
ameliorate traffic issues.
On the other hand
,
cars
provide people with the freedom of movement. The ease of transportation that a car brings is significant than any other form of vehicle and one can go from a destination to another without wasting their precious time .
Therefore
, time and distance are not barriers anymore.
Secondly
,
cars
can give comfort while travelling compared to
bicycles
for long journies.
For instance
, one can read books, listen to favourite songs or even play with children in the car.
Finally
, families can go together.
This
becomes especially helpful when there are elderly, the disabled or even sick members in the families. In conclusion. I reiterate that undoubtedly,
bicycles
are
an
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inexpensive and eco-friendly
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of transportation . Even though, the benefits of
cars
in a matter of privacy, comfort, security cannot be overlooked.
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