many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. other believe that government should take care of it. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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is majorly depend

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on

person's

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will or preference or how

onw

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one

now

wants to lead his or her our life.

However

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I believe

government's

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the government's

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role is essential as well, to bring upfront

healthy

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a healthy

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nation through healthy individuals.

First

and foremost, each and every individual should take care of themselves by opting

healthy

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for healthy

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alternatives and changing their lifestyle.

For instance

,

instead

of consuming junk food like chips, cola, pizza,

etcetra

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etcetera

in heft amount, they can include fresh fruits, coconut water,

vegetables

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etcetra

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etcetera

.

In addition

to

this

doing exercise for 20 minutes, 5 days a week leads to

release

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of endorphins which

not

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is not

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only helpful for their physical or mental

health

but

also

it

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apply

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improves your relationship with their family is along with

this

it

also

enchances

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enhances

the concentration which eventually gives them success at work.

On the other hand

, there are other

group

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of people who argue that

government

should introduce policies or programmes to aware people

about

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the benefits of

balanced

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diet. Apart from the

government

should compel private institute to

organis

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organise

games or other activities from time to time,

also

follow the same practice in

government

should

also

keep in mind the

health

of vulnerable population like children and pregnant women who

needs

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extra care and assistance.

For instance

, education about iron supplements should be given in school for

adolescents

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girls. In conclusion,

although

government

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the government

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is encouraging people

making

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policies

but

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health

is more of individual responsibility as it is in his or her hand how they want to live their life.