Many developing countries require aid from international organizations to grow. Many people think that this aid should be financial, while others believe practical aid and advice are more useful. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

Various growing nations process that they should be economically helped through international organisation. Whereas, others believe that

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of financial aid, alternative measures should be adopted.

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is the scenario, which completely depends on the situation of the country. I personally think that both financial help and advice given would be

benefitial

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beneficial

for the developing nation. People who

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availability

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of financial benefits do assume that foreign firms should inject funds into the budding nations

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so that in long run these countries can reap the benefits and become competent enough to eradicate the national crisis, which they might be undergoing.

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, funding

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project

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into IT firms would reinstate creating more jobs and

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eradicating unemployment.

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money contributed towards the education, hospital or tourism sector would help the underdeveloped countries to overcome the problem of poverty, death and

illetracy

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illiteracy

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, some group believes that

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of investing money, these international sectors should give valuable advice and impart essential skills which could rather combat the issues that

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to the growing nation.

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as, WHO

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ideology on

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the creation

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of antidotes, so that a country can produce medicine internally and would

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rather

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the dollar

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and invest it somewhere which is more needed. To conclude, I would completely go with

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the adoption

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of both of the

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. I certainly do assume that developing countries need financial as well as ideological aids, in order to help them to come up successfully.