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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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In the twenty century, the number of nuclear
families
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 outnumbers the number of extended
families
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,
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 of the tendency to smaller
families
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. Being a member of
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families
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 has several positive points that will be discussed in
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 essay. As far as the merit of the nuclear family is concerned,
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 goes without saying that, the expenditure of the small family is greatly lower than the large one.
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, the expenses of a five-member family are averagely between $4000 and $6000, per month. In oppose to, a family with three members which their outgoing is half of
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 amount. What is more, a larger family need bigger accommodation too,
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 a major part of
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’ salary belongs to rent.
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, substantial problems
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 as control of monthly expenditure, debts and mortgages are faced with family. These are reasons for the blooming trend to smaller
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. The stable upbringing of
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 is a demanding and time-consuming process. The parent in a large family is busy with household duties. At
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 of a hectic lifestyle, parents are not able to set a time to spend with their
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.
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, the psychological needs of the child,
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, receiving proper attention are not met, and
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 issue will cause some behavioural problems.
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, parents in small
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 have plenty of time to devote to their kids.
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, they can read more books about having an active role in the relationship with the child. To conclude, as an implication of higher expenses in an extended family
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 the need to spend time to upbringing the normal
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 (physically and mentally), there is a growing tendency to have one or two
children
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. I strongly opine that
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 the small family will benefit both,
children
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 and family,
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, will help to have a society which people have normal personality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial stability
  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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