Completing universities education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that the

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higher study from the college is very important to get select for a good

job

, while some people believe that practical experience enhance soft skills

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required to get a good

job

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essay,

i

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will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support and opinion. on the one hand ,

education

is the basic

requirment

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requirement

to get a good

job

or to start any work in

the

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society.

moreover

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there are so many students

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study

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studying

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in the

university

and

get

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a good

job

. in the

university

students learn and make them perfect and you will get a positive and

studius

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studies

studious

studios

atmosphare

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atmosphere

to learn and

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a goal and target or success in your life.

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instance

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there is a survey happen in that from IIT

mumbai

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has

trainned

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trained

the students in that way everyone got a

job

in

mutinational

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multinational

company with the higher package.

On the other hand

,

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myriad of people

think

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that the enhance soft skills and

get

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getting

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practical experience is more important to get a good

job

.

although

practical

experince

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experience

is important to get a

job

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, to

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for

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interview some company has a minimum

education

requirment

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requirement

to attend the interview. To illustrate if you have

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exprience

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experience

for 20 years

to support

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supporting

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a doctor and u know the basic things to give treatment with the help of the doctor ,but you will not be

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and work as a doctor in any hospital. So basic

education

for

the

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good

university

is required to start

a professional activities

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a professional activity

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. In my opinion,

Education

from the

university

is highly demanding to start a

cariear

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career

carrier

with a reputated

organistation

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organisation

organization

.

however

practical knowledge is acceptable for some

proffesional

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professional

, because, in

this

competetion

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competition

of era pupils need a higher

education

from the

reputated

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reputed

university

. To conclude,

education

is the

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backbone

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back bone

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for all the individual

although

to join a good

job

person should have a minimum

education

from the

university

.

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in the

society

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practical experience

is have

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a

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always a need to get a

job

but

education

also

perlerly important.