You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, - tell your neighbour that you are going away - ask your neighbour to take care of your house for you - explain what tasks you would like your neighbour to do.

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Dear Mrs Stone, I am writing to you to let you know that I will be visiting my parents, and would like to request your help to look after a few things in my house while I am away. I will be leaving on Friday in the evening to my hometown. I plan to stay there for two weeks, as I want to give time

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my parents, and

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check-up. While I am away, could you please help to water the plants in my garden? Just once a day in the evening would be good enough. The water outlet is near my pineapple plants. Would you mind

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keep the newspapers, that are delivered every morning, please? I will leave a box near the doorstep for you to put the newspapers in.

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but not least, if anybody comes looking for me, would you please let them know that I am away and ask them to call my mobile

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? I am scheduled to be back home on the 30th of November

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unless there is any change in the schedule. If you face any difficulties in doing any of my requests, please do not hesitate to reach my mobile at 77559983. Thank you so much in advance! Yours faithfully, Norah

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

218 words

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