In spite of technological developments in transportation , many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination .What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

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Technology has reached every nook and corner of the world. Even the transportation is not untouched, but many deem that one must choose
ecofriendly
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eco-friendly
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means of transport
such
as
bicycle
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a bicycle
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. Opting
this
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have
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many benefits as well as drawbacks. I'll discuss it in
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essay.
To begin
with, using cycle as conveyance can be a boon for
environment
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the environment
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which can resolve the issue of pollution
upto
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great
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extent. Short distances,
for
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can be covered through
this
. It not only clean the surroundings but
also
reduces
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health problems.
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, in India, after
COVID-19
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the COVID-19
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pandemic, people get more aware
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their physique and opted
cycling
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for cycling
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as an alternative to stay fit
instead
of going to
gym
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the gym
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. On the paradoxical side, other people believe that bicycle is very time consuming, a person can not opt
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while going on interviews where there punctuality matters.
Moreover
, it is not worth
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case of emergency or any other medical conditions
although
it takes more time as compared to cars or buses. To illustrate, a pregnant woman cannot be taken on
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cycle for her delivery,
definitely
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four
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four-wheeler
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wheeler
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is required. To conclude, there are many optimistic outcomes of using
bicycle
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bicycles
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. It can change the global style of living which will be
a
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greatest relief to
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mother earth.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-friendly
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • urban pollution
  • congestion
  • cycling infrastructure
  • weather dependency
  • vulnerable
  • initial purchase
  • ongoing maintenance
  • secure storage
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