Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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A section of
society
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believes that in today's world, few strategies followed in promoting
products
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are not
profesional
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professional
as well as not acceptable.
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, other's disagree with
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approach. In my opinion,
advertisements
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nowadays are negatively persuading
children
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and young adults. To
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with ,
advertisements
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targetting on
children
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may cause detrimental effects on
society
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. In contemporary times,almost all junk foods are being promoted with the
children
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's favourite cartoons character.
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allure students to eat unhealthy foods that are rich in calories .
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,
this
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not only
assist
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them
to
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in
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gais
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gain
weight but
also
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make them
to
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suspectible
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susceptible
to many health issues.
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,
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candy bar sales increased
upto
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up to
70% after publishing an ad with a famous hero in
india
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.
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,
umprofesional
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professional
unprofessional
commercials would negatively impact
the
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society
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.
Secondly
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,
advertisements
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may develop wrong values in young adults . In recent times,Tv commercials are mainly concentrating only on their
products
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sale that would encourage the young adults to respect the
matials
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materials
material
instead
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of
people
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. When
this
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behaviour develops in
people
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that may lead to a materialistic
society
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. If that happens,
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it will make
people
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to
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be self-centred and concentrate on their progress alone.
In addition
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, young
people
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may waste their money on unnecessary
products
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.
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,
advertisements
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could create impudent behaviour in
younger
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the younger
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generation. In conclusion, advertisement methods targeting
children
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and without social values would cause negative impacts
i
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a country .
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, companies should not use these
stratergies
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strategies
to promote their
products
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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