Nowadays it is a bigger problem in front of the govenrment to provide satisfactory house to their increasing population whilst still trying to save the environment . Discuss this statement and give your opinion .

Basic needs like clothes , food and shelter are important for the survival of an individual . At the present time , providing shelter to the increasing population is the biggest problem
encouter
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encountered
encounter
by the
government
.
Although
it does not mean that
their
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is no land for construction , they do not want to
demage
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damage
the environment . According to my opinion , there are other actions that can be taken by the
govenment
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government
to encounter
this
situation .
First
and foremost , make the houses on land where farming is not possible . To illustrate ,
however
, the
government
cut trees to make free land for construction , they can use the free lands
were
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growing a tree is not possible .
In addition
, every facility should be provided
on
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that place .
For example
, if every facility is provided , people are more attracted towards that place and start leaving on that place .
Moreover
, construct eco-friendly accommodation .
For instance
, make the housed around the tree so there is no need to cut it , take it with home-like make the roof of the tree .
Furthermore
, encourages
the
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people to grow more and more trees . If they grow more trees
then
there is no loss to the environment or if there is any damage , it can be repaired . In conclusion ,
although
providing
home
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is the responsibility of the
government
they do not have to
be worry
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about environmental
drmages
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damages
damage
and can
consruct
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construct
eco-friendy
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homes . In my
opinion
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the
government
can take the steps which do not
demage
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damage
the
evironment
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environment
and provide shelter to its population .
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