Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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opines that

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generation should be independent

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when it comes to choosing one's

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there are few others, who suggest that they must be guided to

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. Choosing a

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turning

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thorough research on it.

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decisions should not be considered trivial, as it does have

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impact on one's future. People, who

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that children should make

choice

for themselves

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when it comes to their

career

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would in turn help them to grow up to be a happy individual in their own space or job.

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freedom to decide what is good or what is bad for them, make them responsible citizens at a very young age.

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would in turn help these

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children

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to decide what they want to become once they grow up.

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conducted by UCOL university found that teenagers are certainly sure of what to do in future.

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, few others do state that young people are ignorant, they do not

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the knowledge of good or bad.

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, choosing

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should not be given as a discretionary

choice

at their hand. They should be educated about different

career

prospects along with the benefits that would be

dervied

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derived

by choosing a profession.

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is what most of the parents

also

do. They comprehend their children to take on a job, which would

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enable

them to gain wealth and status in

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society.I completely do think that there should be guidance given to the younger generation along with that

choice

should be left in their hands. As

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is the best method for them to choose

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path for them. To conclude, guidance and freedom of

choice

if given together will actually enable to combat the pressure which could dismantle the young people these days to go in a right direction

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while making a

choice

of

career

.