It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
With the advent of
technology
humans have experienced many unexpected Add a comma
,technology
thing
and now has become fascinated about exploring these Change to a plural noun
things
type
of things. It is a recent trend nowadays that people usually want to visit such
natural places
like
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as
south
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the south
pole
. In this
essay
we will discuss Add a comma
,essay
pros
and cons of travelling to Correct article usage
the pros
such
places
.
Firstly
, Visiting at
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apply
places
like south
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the south
pole
not only increase person
ability to Correct article usage
a person
innvoate
new things but Correct your spelling
innovate
also
to learn different new things. Visiting south
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the south
pole
can help us in experiencing new
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a new
type
of atmosphere and how to surivive
at Correct your spelling
survive
such
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
places
. For example
, If we travel at some places
like south pole
only, at the place the whole atmosphere will be different, so it somehow help
human being to get additional information of that Change the verb form
helps
places
. Moreover
, we may see some new creatures and could learn about them. Also
we may be able to find new ways to endure that Add a comma
,Also
type
of environment.Hence
, these
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this
type
of knowledge will surely help scientist
in some way or other.
There could be disadvantages too of going to Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
such
places
. Although
, when a person go
to Change the verb form
goes
these kind
of new Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
places
they go with proper equiment
and food Correct your spelling
equipment
but
as we have not proper information about those Remove the conjunction
apply
places
. Therefore
, it could be a big drawback and so we can be in trouble. Let me expain
it with Correct your spelling
explain
example
, We can see lots of people Add an article
an example
the example
try
to visit remote Wrong verb form
trying
places
but thier
end is very devastating because these are all new Correct your spelling
their
places
. They start visiting these places
with lot
of motivation but as time passes they get Change the article
a lot
frustated
as they are not keen Correct your spelling
frustrated
of
that Change preposition
on
enviornment
and so most of the time end up Correct your spelling
environment
by
losing their life.
To conclude, I would say that it is necessary for Change preposition
apply
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a scientist
scientist
to visit these Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
sort
of Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
places
for new innovations but the conditon
should be that they should have some idea about the environment and necessary items so that they can go with all those and can survive there.Correct your spelling
condition
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...