It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

With the advent of

technology

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humans have experienced many unexpected

thing

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things

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and now has become fascinated about experiencing these

type

of things. It is

recent

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trend nowadays that people usually want to visit some natural

places

like

south

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pole

. In

this

essay

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we will discuss

pros

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the pros

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and cons of travelling to

such

places

.

Firstly

, Visiting

at

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places

like

south

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the south

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pole

not only increase

person

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a person

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ability to

innvoate

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innovate

new things but

also

to learn different new things. Visiting

south

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pole

can help us in experiencing

new

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type

of atmosphere and how to

surivive

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survive

at

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this

type

of

places

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place

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.

For example

, If we travel at some

places

like south

pole

only, at the place the whole atmosphere will be different, so it somehow

help

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human being to get additional information of that

places

.

Moreover

, we may find some new creatures and get detail about those.

Also

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We may

able

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to find new ways to bear

at

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in

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that

type

of environment.

These

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of knowledge will surely help

scientist

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scientists

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some

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in some

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experiment

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. There could be disadvantages too of going to

such

places

.

Although

, when a person

go

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to

these kind

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of new

places

they go with proper

equiment

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equipment

and food

but

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as we have not proper

informaition

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information

about those

places

.

Somethimes

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Sometimes

, it could be a big drawback and so we can be in trouble. Let me explain with

example

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, We can see lots of people

try

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trying

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to visit remote

places

but

thier

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their

end is very devastating because it is all new

places

. They start with visiting

places

with

lot

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of motivation but as time passes they get

frustated

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frustrated

as they are not keen

of

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on

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that

enviornment

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environment

and so most of the time end up

by

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losing their life. To conclude, I would say that it is necessary for

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a scientist

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scientist

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scientists

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to visit these

sort

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sorts

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of

places

for new innovations but the

conditon

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condition

should be that they should have some idea about the environment necessary items so that they can go with all those and can survive there.