Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

Over the

last

two or three decades,

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rate has been increased dramatically due to poverty and man's

behaviour

.

However

, some say that

underprevilaged

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underprivileged

is the primary reason

of

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for

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crime while others think that person's

characterstics

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characteristics

is

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are

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played

crucial

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a crucial

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part

of

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in

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apply

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an

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any

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illegal activity.

In

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this

essay discusses both viewpoints and I will give my opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, poverty is the primary aspect for will do any

misleed

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mislead

misdeed

misled

because money is played

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part of people survival.

In other words

, needs and requirements can stimulate to do any kind of

offence

,

therefore

they will do

cime

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time

.

For instance

, a current report said that more than 70% of the crime rate is happened by underdeveloped nations due to they do not have a wealthy background in order to most these countries folks take other person's

assest

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assets

asset

such

as theft. Obviously,

underprivilaged

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underprivileged

can be stimulated to do something an illegal activity,

this

is the foremost causes for doing

these misdeed

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this misdeed

these misdeeds

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.

Conversely

, a person's

behaviour

might be provoked to do any lawbreaking activity, some

has

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have

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a wealthy family background, even though he does illegal work

such

as scam, corruption.

For instance

,

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bollywood

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a bollywood

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famous actor who Saruk khan son recently has arrested among the sea by the Mumbai cops because he sold drugs illegally.

This

kind of the public only

do

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misdeed for earning more capital.

Hence

, not only does

offence

by poverty but

also

does

this

by a man's

behaviour

and character too. To conclude, nowadays

lawbreaking

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the lawbreaking

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rate is increased tremendously than ever before because

of

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apply

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the population want

to

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apply

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a wealthy lifestyle.

Although

,

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underpriviliged

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underprivileged

is the primary reason for doing misdeed, a women's

behaviour

can

provoked

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to do any

offence

. In my opinion, about

this

, a guy's character and

behaviour

is the most reason for doing any other

offence

. I hope

this

process is unconducive to

buiding

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building

a healthy and

safety

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society.