Study shows that many criminals have a low level education.For that reason, some people believe that the bast way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Some recent researchers point out that most
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criminals
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have a
low level
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education
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, which results in many of them re-offend right after being released.
Therefore
, it is believed that the only way to cut down on crime is to provide those
people
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education
in
prison
. I totally agree with that idea,
besides
, I
also
recommend some other ways that can be effective in solving that problem.
To begin
with, it is well said that we should educate lawbreakers better in
prison
. A lot of
people
who have just been free from their penalties find it difficult for them to find a job, which leads to re-offensive activities very soon after. Some educational programs like vocational training or orientation will really do their works. They equip those wrongdoers with appropriate skills that help them to seek
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a good position, with
stable
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salary.
For instance
, in Canada, each
prisoners
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have to read a number of books, have
themselves
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a job certification before they can be released,
as a result
, Canada has the lowest rate of
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people
who re-offend. Another proposal to alleviate the rate of re-offenders can be educating everyone to have a more sympathetic look toward
people
after
prison
. A multitude of those
people
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seriously discriminated
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it nearly impossible to re-
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integrate
into society. As a consequence, violence or even
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are like a kind of revenge.
Last
but not least, the government has to be strict to a certain extent in declaring punishment
such
as long life imprisonment, imprisonment with hard work
beside
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capital punishment. Ergo, only
education
in
prison
is not the solution to educate
criminal
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, another method must be applied to reduce
the
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crime. To conclude,
although
most of the offenders have limited
education
so that they do atrocious work. It is a better measure
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teaching in
prison
may help them to limit crime and
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better
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future.
However
, from my perspective,
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this
, child
education
, severe punishment would be the other best solution to
this
menace.
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