In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, every marketing campaign always
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its product coming up with new ingredient or function in different ways.
However
, are all
products
pioneers?
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essay will point out
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principle behind outstanding product marketing
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and dive deeper
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this
case
by
case
phenomenon.
Curiousity
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Curiosity
and the psychology of glorifying rare and brand-new things of
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humans
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are the deficiency of customers which
business
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businesses
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love to make use of. Honestly, just a few
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can release innovative
products
to the market whilst the rest are familiar with others.
Therefore
, other
products
have to wear a shirt called advertisement with fancy words about incredible new ingredients or functions that can easily gain attraction from
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the customer
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customer
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customers
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. How can
business
magically turn their
products
to be the best and newest ever? Indeed, it
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easier than your thought,
for instance
,
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using one ingredient chemical name that no one but only chemist
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ever heard can provoke a wave of curiosity from people.
This
phenomenon in marketing is an
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inevitable
consequence in a booming trade century and it is
case
by
case
to judge. Hypothetically, every
business
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the truth to their
customer
then
they will no longer call themselves businesses but nonprofit organizations. Because, at the of the day, their purpose and target are shortly and significantly called profit. For those ingenious
provider
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providers
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coming with innovation, it is reasonable for them to announce their results and advertise their
products
. Meanwhile, others,
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even invest little or much money,
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still have to receive back. People usually see
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the consumer
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as
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vulnerable
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and should be protected in the chess match, and there is not
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wrong
about
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that, but a thousand
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need
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compesation
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compensation
for their living, for survival, and for lives too. To conclude,
advertisment
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advertisement
is and has never been a hundred
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truth and
business
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businesses
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never do anything without
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compensation
. So the best solution is depending on
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customer
. There is not thing believable
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your experience and your knowledge. Being a wise
customer
by researching and contemplating carefully before making a decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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