In many Countries, small shops are closing. Give your reasons about this. Is it positive or negative? Give examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

The global

economy

has rapidly changed within

the

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recent history. Certain authorities claim that a

number

of small retail outlets are

giving-up

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their

shops

around the world. In my view, the increasing

number

of

supermarkets

and changing of consumers’ buying

behaviors

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are the main reasons for

this

situation

.

However

, in my opinion, despite all the plus points, there are several drawbacks

outweigh

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towards

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the countries’

economy

and the community wellbeing through

this

situation

.

Firstly

, the increasing

number

of shopping malls have a significant impact

towards

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this

situation

.

Supermarkets

are facilitated customers with a variety of high-quality product ranges and services under one roof.

In addition

, they allow

a

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considerable freedom and a space

to

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their customers to decide the goods and services which they intended to purchase.

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,

on

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last

Sunday, I had spent more than 3 hours at Arpico supermarket to buy ingredients for a Red Velvet cake, and I was in a video call with

sister

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throughout

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through out

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the whole time, but none of

staff

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were

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disturbed me. Consumers’ buying

behaviors

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is

also

a major reason to close small

shops

. Due to the busy lifestyles, nowadays, most people tend to enjoy their weekend shopping as a family gathering. The marketing teams of

supermarkets

ascertained those needs and facilitated shopping malls with all the leisure activities including; restaurants, cafes, cinemas and children’s play

area

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to attract more consumers.

As a result

, almost all the city residents are used to

spend

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their weekend evenings at shopping complexes to relax with their loved

once

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while purchasing their households. In my opinion, closing small

shops

will negatively

influenced

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towards

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both the country’s

economy

and the community.

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,

the

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most of the small entrepreneurs are selling their

production

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via those small retail

shops

.

Thus

, closing those market opportunities will reduce the

number

of entrepreneurs

to

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the

economy

.

Moreover

, the lower-level income community will face more difficulties owing to

this

situation

. they will unable to afford the prices of high-quality

supermarkets

, due to their limited income. In conclusion,

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dramatical

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increase

of

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supermarket chains, and the busy life

routings

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routines

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of consumers are the major reasons for closing small

shops

in several countries.

Nevertheless

, I believe that

,

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this

situation

negatively affect

towards

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the

economy

and society by reducing the

number

of small entrepreneurs while limiting the facilities for

lower income

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communities in the country.