A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sam, It is indeed interesting to know that you are planning

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a camping trip

this

summer for the

first

time. Frankly speaking, I think you should go ahead with your plan as you would have

huge

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opportunity to come close to the grace of Mother Nature and will have a memorable

holiday

.

Although

I couldn’t make any camping

holiday

till now, I have gathered fair idea about

such

holidaying from few of my friends who have experienced

such

holidays. I have heard their stories and believe that it’s worth spending time and money provided the plan and preparation for the trip

is

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perfectly done.

This

is because it has challenges as well as it’s adventurous. It’s different from a protected

holiday

where everything is made to order. In camping

holiday

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there are

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elements of uncertainty like weather

condition

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, habitats that exist, unavailability of basic needs and the different environment. All these are important factors in your journey and will be a great learning experience.

Moreover

, the camping

holiday

would provide ample opportunity to meet nature’s own beauty so closely and

definitely

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it would be

highly

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refreshing one. Most importantly you will be out of your comfort zone and your physical endurance test will

also

be automatically done if you go

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rock climbing or if you swim across the canals. I think the duration of the

holiday

should be flexible

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to have a fulfilling sojourn.

Lastly

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I would like to give you a surprise. I just want to join you in your forthcoming camping

holiday

and

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you to revert with your detailed itinerary so that we both can have a dream

holiday

this

summer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Nav