Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays , after completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to
work
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for a duration of time rather than going to their
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studies
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directly . There are several benefits and disbenefits to
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a break after school .
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with , the
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and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousness about what they want to do
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.
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, even though they are totally indulged in their
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for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and spend a quantity of their time .
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they grab more knowledge
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and have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just
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for
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after completing the school
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they do not have much time to think about their subjects and interests .
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, they have experience .
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, they go for
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, they get a good experience and have a chance to learn well about it practically .
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, some students do not return back to their
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, they are doing a
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or job they like it as its earning is good and
work
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is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it .
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,
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they lose the chance to be expert in that field ,
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they do their
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then
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they have a degree and can take a job in
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company , now they can only do
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on
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scale .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • school leavers
  • real-world experience
  • independence
  • structured environment
  • financial benefits
  • academic momentum
  • gap year
  • rigors
  • sidetracked
  • social disconnect
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