One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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only resulted in higher expenses and did not yield any benefits for them. Thus
, making their economy worse.
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