One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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of modern era health care facilities the deaths have
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it makes a plethora of options available
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, scientists and inventors due to
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of having longer life can accomplish their research.
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, Telsa who initiated the invention of
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the verge of finishing it.
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, due to his
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he could not finish it .It could have been a boon to the present generation. So, it would be beneficial if age can be increased.
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, the foremost
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is competition in various things like food, space and opportunities. Hereafter, there are famines already
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occurring
around the world due to the existing
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pollution
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gases through a variety of methodologies and the excess humanity would only make it worse. To illustrate it, China which has people living longer have turned out to be a
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burden
to their society as they would require extreme care in terms of medication.
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only resulted in higher expenses and did not yield any benefits for them.
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, making their economy worse. In conclusion,
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there are multiple advantages of good treatments by various means. When planned with efficient strategies
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could actually pave the path for
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the betterment
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of communities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • elderly population
  • health care systems
  • pension funds
  • extended family relationships
  • quality of life
  • aging population
  • economic growth
  • volunteer work
  • expertise
  • financial planning
  • retirement
  • age-related diseases
  • medical research
  • healthier lifestyles
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