One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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of modern era health care facilities the deaths have

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decreased

considerably and human lives are extended.

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it makes a plethora of options available

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as access to ancient knowledge and living with loved ones.

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significant merit of

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is, it aids us in tapping the knowledge of

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have gone extinct

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.

Secondly

, scientists and inventors due to

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of having longer life can accomplish their research.

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, Telsa who initiated the invention of

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was almost

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the verge of finishing it.

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he could not finish it .It could have been a boon to the present generation. So, it would be beneficial if age can be increased.

On the other hand

, the foremost

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demerit of

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is competition in various things like food, space and opportunities. Hereafter, there are famines already

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occurring

around the world due to the existing

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pollution

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green house

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gases through a variety of methodologies and the excess humanity would only make it worse. To illustrate it, China which has people living longer have turned out to be a

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burden

to their society as they would require extreme care in terms of medication.

Furthermore

,

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only resulted in higher expenses and did not yield any benefits for them.

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, making their economy worse. In conclusion,

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there are multiple advantages of good treatments by various means. When planned with efficient strategies

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could actually pave the path for

betterment

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the betterment

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of communities.