A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time summer. He/She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - it is a new experience where you can enjoy the nature, example * describe some possible disadvantages - sleeping at night is bit scary because of the animals * say whether you would like to go to camping with your friend this summer - I'd like to join with you to go for a camping in coming summer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear Thushani, I hope
this
letter finds you in a good health. I'd like to give some tips for your very
first
camping that you were asked
from
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me
last
Saturday. Camping is one of the best
trip
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I'd like to go
for
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every year because it's a good experience where you can enjoy
the
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nature. During the camping, everyone is getting a chance to sleep inside a tent, prepare meals by
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them selves
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, take bath from a
revier
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river
or pond and many more, so you can enjoy your holiday with maximum fun. While camping, sleeping at night is
bit
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scary because of the wild animals and
also
, there are no
comforable
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comfortable
places to go for
toiletires
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toiletries
. Another negative experience that we can get is a
mosqeto
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mosquito
problem.
Eventhough
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Even though
we have drawbacks, we can enjoy our days with those
challanges
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challenges
. I'd like to join
with
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you to go
for
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a
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camping
in
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coming
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the coming
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summer. Stay in touch. Best wishes, Masha.
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