A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time summer. He/She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - it is a new experience where you can enjoy the nature, example * describe some possible disadvantages - sleeping at night is bit scary because of the animals * say whether you would like to go to camping with your friend this summer - I'd like to join with you to go for a camping in coming summer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Thushani, I hope

this

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letter finds you in a good health. I'd like to give some tips for your very

first

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camping that you were asked

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last

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Saturday. Camping is one of the best

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every year because it's a good experience where you can enjoy

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nature. During the camping, everyone is getting a chance to sleep inside a tent, prepare meals by

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themselves

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them selves

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, take bath from a

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river

or pond and many more, so you can enjoy your holiday with maximum fun. While camping, sleeping at night is

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scary because of the wild animals and

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, there are no

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comfortable

places to go for

toiletires

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toiletries

. Another negative experience that we can get is a

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mosquito

problem.

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we have drawbacks, we can enjoy our days with those

challanges

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challenges

. I'd like to join

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you to go

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camping

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coming

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the coming

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summer. Stay in touch. Best wishes, Masha.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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