Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

Parents are giving more
pressure
on their's beloved
child
due to they will be lived in a sophisticated
life
.
Therefore
, they put an enormous level of
pressure
on their kids.
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essay discusses what is the reason
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mothers do
this
and I think
this
is negative
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child
life
. Mothers and
fathers
are put more
pressure
on their beloved for their kids will be lived a good lifestyle in future and they would be gotten a good job with handsome salary,
therefore
they do
this
.
This
is a competitive world, a
child
should be put more effort
to
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their studies in order to they will live happily without facing any financial trouble.
For instance
, In India
fathers
always think about their little
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one
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and
giving
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more
pressure
to their
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related ,
as a
result
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Indian people have a better lifestyle to compared any other Asian nation. These are the main reasons for they are
put
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more
pressure
on their children. Even though,
this
trend is a negative development for a kid career.
Firstly
, they never learn anything about their studies due to
pressure
, they cannot handle too much
pressure
,
consequently
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they might be done
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suicide
.
For example
, in
Tamilnadu
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state of India conducts NEET entrance exam for
medical
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student
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students
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but before
attent
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attend
the
exam
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Tamilnadu students have been doing suicide since NEET introduce as a national exam. The main reason for they do not know
about
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how to handle
this
pressure
by
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parents. Obviously,
fathers
put
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too much
of
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pressure
to
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a
child
can
leads
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to
be
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a
life
threate
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threat
. To conclude,
in
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these days most
mother
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mothers
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and
fathers
are giving more
pressure
on their's little
one
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due to they will be
live
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a sophisticated
life
in
upcoming
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years. I think
this
is a negative development for parent's beloved one because
this
can
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to create a depression ,
thus
they might be done
sucide
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suicide
side
, I hope
this
process is unconducive to students
life
and
mothrs
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mothers
never put
pressure
on their's toddler.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excessive pressure
  • Academic achievements
  • Professional success
  • Secure future
  • Social comparison
  • Competitive environment
  • Psychological impact
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Resilience
  • Work ethic
  • Emotional well-being
  • Supportive parenting
  • Achievements
  • Life skills
  • Balance
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