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Levels of Unemployment in 3 countries from 2004-2008

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 of people who did not have jobs in each year from 2004 to 2008 comparing 3 countries, A, B and
C
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. Overall, the
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 of the levels of unemployment in
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country
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 A and
C
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 show upward trends whereas those in
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country
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C
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 show downward trends. In 2004, the
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 of unemployed people in
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 A was 2 %. It fluctuated
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 between 2005 and 2007
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 it rose up to almost 5% in 2008. For
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C
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, the level is barely 1% in 2004 but it increased dramatically to almost 6% in 2008.
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C
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 even overtook A near 2006. In terms of
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 B, the level was about 3% in 2004. It did not change much between 2005 and 2006. The
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 dropped to about 1.8% in2007 but it grew back to almost 3% again in 2008.
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