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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. - Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at museum - Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - Give details of when you would be available

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Dear Sir, I have come to know that you are looking for Voluntaries to do a part-time job in a museum. I am very much asserted to be a part of
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 team. Since childhood museum appeals to me, I have always wished to work at
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 place. Currently, I am organizing a database in a library, my concern is to develop my skills and abilities by providing unpaid services. As I have enormous experience in handling database management systems. I want to contribute my skills and knowledge.
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; it would be a great revelation for me to serve as a docent. I have the ability to guide and educate the visitors by telling them historical stories. My working hours are from 8am to 4pm in the library. I can spare two hours on daily basis from 5pm to 7pm, other than that; I can spare 4 hours on Saturday and Sunday every week. It would be a great pleasure if you allow me to have a short interview to elaborate
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 skills. Sincerely yours. Rehan Liaqat
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