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Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, collaborating study is a new teaching method, where
students
 can share their ideas. There are some individuals who claim that
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 team up study is better than learning alone. I partially agree with
this
 notion. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some pros and cons of
this
 method.
To begin
 with, the predominant reason why folks favour
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 the school is that , because it is helped pupils to understand harder subjects like
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 math and science. During working with the team, they can express their problems and ideas with each other, When one person helped the other person they can easily learn compared to the teachers' method because they belong to the same class or age.
For example
 , According to the world education forum, 70% of
students
 grades are rising in mathematics and science because of cooperation education.
As a result
, most of the educational institutions show interest on
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 the schooling system because it is increasing
students
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 learning.
However
,
on the other hand
, there are a couple of drawbacks of team schooling.
Firstly
 , the people who are introverted , lost their voice,
therefore
, their shyness.
As a result
, they cannot be socialised with other members as well as other individuals do not provide any support so that, they feel abandoned and face lower self- steam.
For instance
, one of my cousin's sisters
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 going to school because she
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 with other members of her group.
Secondly
, if there is no responsible person who monitors
students
 works
therefore
 that, sometimes they lost their right track. To conclude, in my point of , group learning has a great impact on
students
 life because of that they can improve some skills which will give some benefits in the near future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative environment
  • discussion
  • debate
  • exchange of ideas
  • critical soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • emotional and motivational support
  • isolating
  • personalized pace
  • efficient learning
  • self-discipline
  • accountability
  • educational progress
  • distractions
  • group dynamics
  • commitment
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