Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some advocate the view that the government should not promulgate income

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for its citizens. To the best of my knowledge, I totally disagree with

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statement inasmuch as the funding from taxation can be used to contribute to the benefit of individuals and

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society as a whole.

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with, the majority of money from

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play

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a profound role in improving the living quality of the inhabitants. The justification is that the state budget is crucially important to upgrade the public

infrasstructure

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infrastructure

, which lately

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to a

convinient

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convenient

and safe area for people to live and travel.

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prominent instance is that, with the timely enhancement of the irrigation, a city located near rivers would reduce setbacks of

moonsoon

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monsoon

tide.

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, it is imperative to allocate money

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to the facility in the

vincinity

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vicinity

neibor

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neighbour

namely growing green parks,

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protecting

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the

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environment

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, sustainable growth.

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,

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as a method of saving in case of

unpredictable

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the unpredictable

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situation

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so that the authority may need to get through

difficulty

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time

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times

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. The main rationale is that, in

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of natural disaster or spreading disease, a public fund is the

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aid to support

vulnurable

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vulnerable

people.

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, if it was not the clever decision from the government to

ennact

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enact

the vaccine

campainge

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campaign

campaigns

campaigned

for the community, the unprecedented

pandamic

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pandemic

of covid-19 could not be

controled

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controlled

in

minized

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minimized

mind

consequences.

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,

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is set as a

catalys

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catalyst

to the security of common advantage for people. In that case, a particular proportion of employees' income

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to attribute to the state in order that the living quality can thrive.