In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

The transportation system is changing in the world as many urban towns are encouraged to

use

motor vehicles and many are shifting their trend toward bi-cycles in a reverse mode.

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essay will elaborate on the causes behind it and why people should

use

cycles in cities. Most of the developing countries are accepting

the

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cars

on their roads because they are in transition from non-fuel vehicles to fuel vehicles. They would like to taste a technology and shift their development pace into top gear.

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, as per The Hindu newspaper, three per cent of Indians are buying

cars

for the

first

time in their life since

year

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2000.

However

, developed countries have faced the detrimental effects of diesel or

petrol driven

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cars

. Their citizens are not interested to

use

these pollution exhausters as

it

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they

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cause the health problems

such

as cancer, heart attacks and so on. Due to

this

,

the

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most

of

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the European are building cycle lanes in their towns. So that, people living in

a cities

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cities

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can get

motivation

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to drive cycles and feel safe at the same time. According to

me

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,

government

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the government

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should maintain the balance between fuel

cars

and

bi-cycles

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bicycles

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in their cities. The folks must

use

cars

only when a destination is far away from their

origin

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place or they have to take some bulky items.

Otherwise

, they try to develop their habit to ride a cycle for daily routine works.

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, commute to

office

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the office

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, shopping etcetera. In conclusion, these shifts are motivated

from

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the experience of

urban

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the urban

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population.

Although

, some are choosing cycles or others

cars

,

but

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masses have to choose their vehicle as per their need.