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Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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When you want to boil your rice, you
use
 a pressure pot.
Likewise
, when you need to blend foodstuffs, you
use
 an automatic blender.When you want to press your
clothes
, you
use
 an electric iron, and so on and so forth .
This
 and many more of these
home
equipments
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, make it evident that
technology
 cannot be left out when it comes to the
home
. Everything we do,involves
technology
an
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without one, it seems impossible to live,or that's what it has made us
to
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become. It is of
this
 opinion that I strongly agree that without
technology
, our standard of living is nothing.
To begin
 with, it would be tiresome in
this
 present age,if anyone still uses their hands to wash
clothes
, when there are washing machines,which does the
work
 faster and accurate.Less amount of time is spent and could be used to do something else.
Besides
, you could even leave and read a book or attend a seminar, while the washer does its
work
,making life easier.To add to that, you do not have to worry about
clothes
, as I said earlier, electric irons are there for you to press your
clothes
 when needed.So, do not worry about that job interview because you have
a
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rumpled cloth!
Moreover
,how could we forget the refreshing air that
emmantes
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emanates
 from our air conditioner? Just set the temperature of your choice, and there you have it.There is no need of having to
use
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and
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 external fan or
going
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 outside with the purpose of getting the breeze.
Furthermore
, as opposed to the traditional methods of storing foods,which was very annoying and had
little
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 guarantee to
work
, we have our fridges to do the
work
.
In contrast
 to
this
, many think that the proliferation of
home
 appliances are not worth the hassle.They argue that the orthodox ways of
home
 living
is
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 better off than
than
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the present.
Although
,
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this
 is true in some aspect, it is worthwhile to say that the advantages that our modern tech has brought to us
outweighs
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 the disadvantages of it with relation to archaic methods. In summary,
technology
 has played a huge part in our lives when it comes to
home
 keeping,and it would be safe to say that without it, life will remain to be difficult.
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