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Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is argued that the architectural style of new
buildings
 should be in accordance with existing
buildings
 in an
area
, while others believe that
people
 should have the freedom to design their own
house
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. While there are some valid arguments for uniformity in
architecture
, I agree that
buildings
’ designs should not be too heavily regulated. On the one hand, there are many reasons to require new
buildings
 to follow the
styles
 of existing structures. Advocates of
this
 view believe that it would be better for heritage sites if certain aesthetic features are followed by housing contractors.
For example
, Venice, one of Italy’s most popular cities, is well-loved for its Gothic
architecture
 with domed cathedrals and cobblestone arch bridges.
Such
 harmonious building
styles
 would not have been possible without strict building codes.
Besides
, a homogenous
architecture
 style will ensure that
people
 already living in an
area
 will not be affected negatively by new structures. To be specific, in a town where terraced houses are predominant, constructing a tall and wide apartment complex can compromise or even damage the structural integrity of existing
buildings
.
On the other hand
, I would argue that
people
 should enjoy a certain degree of freedom when building their houses.
First
,
a
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diversity in architectural
styles
 does not take away the beauty of an
area
. In fact, some of the world's most stunning cities - Tokyo, New York, and Singapore - feature varying urbanscapes with skyscrapers as well as classical
architectures
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. These places can attract tourists from all over the world while still offering a variety of
architecture
styles
.
Conversely
, forcing
people
 to adopt a uniform style of building can make a
neighborhood
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 look boring and uninspired.
For example
, many planned suburbs which take a cookie-cutter approach to
architecture
 look sterile and identical compared to a naturally developed city. In conclusion,
although
 it is necessary to maintain some degree of architectural consistency in a historically important site, I still believe that modern
buildings
 should be allowed to be unique to create more aesthetic diversity in an
area
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetic harmony
  • Architectural conservation
  • Cultural integrity
  • Design guidelines
  • Eclectic architecture
  • Facade preservation
  • Heritage sites
  • Historic authenticity
  • Innovative design
  • Planning permission
  • Property valuation
  • Sustainable building
  • Urban landscape
  • Visual continuity
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