Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.

It is often an argued issue that
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life
skills
should be added in the
college
syllabus as
a mandatory courses
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due to
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this
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so many abroad employment opportunities
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nowadays.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
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essay discusses both personal and professional.
To begin
with,
real time
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skills
such
as cooking, housekeeping and gardening is the most important subjects for
college
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curriculum
.
First
personal perspective, these
skills
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the
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utmost significance for an adult because in the past
days
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families were lived as a joint family while grandparents had taught to their's grandchildren about these talents but now most
famlies
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families
live as a nuclear family.
Therefore
, the adults do not have the chance to do
this
,
as a result
, they buy food from hotel
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inorder
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to they will suffer many diseases.
For example
,
in
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India has already included to their
college
syllabus in
real
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life
skills
such
as
Homescience
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Home science
subject is the mandatory course for all students. Obviously, when the universities must be
added
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cooking courses in their
curriculam
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curriculum
for students while they would be
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about it.
Moreover
, these kinds of skilled work
has
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more employment opportunities in abroad countries than native land,
hence
, most
of
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universities
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should be included
this
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course.
In other words
,
real
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life
skills
is
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always being
a
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demand and
this
is an inevitable field too.
For instance
,
in
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Canada gives more job chances for these skilled workers
to
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around the world.
In addition
, these
industries
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is
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a booming sector to around the world,
hence
, each and every
colleges
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should include in the
curriculam
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curriculum
as compulsory subjects. To conclude,
undoubedly
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undoubtedly
real
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real-life
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life
skills
give more employment opportunities
as well as they
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can arrange for their needs so
college
must be added these courses in the syllabus.
Therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned
detals
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details
. I hope
this
process is conducive to improving a healthy society.
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