Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.
It is often an argued issue that
real
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real-life
life
skills
should be added in the college
syllabus as a mandatory courses
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a mandatory course
mandatory courses
due to
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apply
this
field has
so many abroad employment opportunities Wrong verb form
having
in
nowadays. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement for the following reasons. This
essay discusses both personal and professional.
To begin
with, real time
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real-time
skills
such
as cooking, housekeeping and gardening is the most important subjects for college
curriculam
. Correct your spelling
curriculum
First
personal perspective, these skills
is
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are
the
utmost significance for an adult because in the past Change preposition
of the
days
families were lived as a joint family while grandparents had taught to their's grandchildren about these talents but now most Change to a genitive case
day's
days'
famlies
live as a nuclear family. Correct your spelling
families
Therefore
, the adults do not have the chance to do this
, as a result
, they buy food from hotel Correct your spelling
in order
inorder
to they will suffer many diseases. Correct your spelling
in order
For example
, in
India has already included to their Change preposition
apply
college
syllabus in real
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real-life
life
skills
such
as Homescience
subject is the mandatory course for all students. Obviously, when the universities must be Correct your spelling
Home science
added
cooking courses in their Wrong verb form
add
curriculam
for students while they would be Correct your spelling
curriculum
known
about it.
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know
Moreover
, these kinds of skilled work has
more employment opportunities in abroad countries than native land, Change the verb form
have
hence
, most of
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apply
universities
should be included Add an article
the universities
this
course. Change preposition
in this
In other words
, real
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real-life
life
skills
is
always being Change the verb form
are
a
demand and Remove the article
apply
this
is an inevitable field too. For instance
, in
Canada gives more job chances for these skilled workers Change preposition
apply
to
around the world. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, these industries
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industry
is
a booming sector to around the world, Change the verb form
are
hence
, each and every colleges
should include in the Change to a singular noun
college
curriculam
as compulsory subjects.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
curriculum
undoubedly
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undoubtedly
real
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real-life
life
skills
give more employment opportunities as well as they
can arrange for their needs so Add the comma(s)
, as well as they,
college
must be added these courses in the syllabus. Therefore
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned detals
. I hope Correct your spelling
details
this
process is conducive to improving a healthy society.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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