Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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detrimental impact on both people and the community. I strongly disagree with the statement for two reasons ; it helped many people to reunion again and support new-small businesses to grow. I'm going to

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these reasons in the coming essay. Generally, the key element of social networking applications is to connect with others whether they are in your country or overseas.

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, after the advent of these sites, many individuals have the opportunity to find their high school friends after a period of disconnection which is a great benefit of these applications I believe.

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, you can easily search and find your childhood peers by using websites

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as Facebook which is considered one of the well-known platforms these days.

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, these websites made a tremendous boost for those who set up a new business. To be more precise, establishing an account on Twitter or other networking elements is a pretty chance to facilitate the connection with firms or customers which resulted in the growth of any product

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to receiving feedback from others which obsulotly would help the company.

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one of the social sites to advertise their goods or services as well as feedbacks. In conclusion, social media websites have a positive impact on people by easing the reunion among friends. So, in terms of community, the advantage of these platforms is to support individuals to increase the value of their startups.