Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,
same
products can be bought everywhere in the world. Correct article usage
the same
This
is the main reason why almost all of the countries gradually become similar to each other. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
development has significant impacts on society both Linking Words
in
negative and positive.
On Change preposition
apply
one
hand, being able to buy identical things wherever you are will make our life more convenient. Use synonyms
People
do not have to spend most of their time Use synonyms
on
seeking a way to get the typical Change preposition
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one
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in the past when it is impossible to find the Linking Words
exactly
same thing in Replace the word
exact
different
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a different
country
. If you live in Thailand, when you are craving Use synonyms
for
sushi, the only solution is booking a flight to Japan which is the only Change preposition
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country
that can offer it for you. Use synonyms
This
means Linking Words
people
are unable to buy sushi whenever they want whereas nowadays, Japanese food is sold almost in every Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is possible for them to get what they want even they do not live in that Linking Words
country
, Japan. Use synonyms
This
is Linking Words
one
of the advantages Use synonyms
for
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of
this
change.
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On the other hand
, if similar products can be provided in every Linking Words
country
, it will be the starting point of decreasing Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
apply
the
diversity around the world. Correct article usage
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Firstly
, Linking Words
people
seem to be less value of their own local cultures. The traditional festivals and knowledge will be easily forgotten because Use synonyms
same
thing can Change the article
the same
be find
everywhere. Change the verb form
be found
People
do not have to pay attention to conservative Use synonyms
this
anymore. The uniqueness of every Linking Words
country
will be demolished. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
traveling
industry will be in Change the spelling
travelling
downward
trend because there is no reason for Correct article usage
a downward
people
to travel overseas. As they can buy whatever they want in their own Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
This
affects directly in Linking Words
economic
system. Add an article
the economic
an economic
People
whose work is related to tourism Use synonyms
such
as a tour guide or local shop's owner are going to face financial problems. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
will become a terrible situation in a long run.
In conclusion, even though life will be easier if identical products can be found all over the world, Linking Words
the disadvantages effects
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the effects of the disadvantages
resulted
from Wrong verb form
resulting
this
improvement is more severe. Linking Words
Therefore
, in my Linking Words
perspective
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,perspective
this
change is a negative Linking Words
one
.Use synonyms
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