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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

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Nowadays, the practice of assessing
students
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 through exams
instead
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 of
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 test
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 increasing.
Although
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 examinations provide
stress free
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 environment to study, it may make
pupils
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to
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loose
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lose
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intrest
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interest
 in their studies. In my opinion,
examination
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the examination
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 can cause more drawbacks than
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beneficial effects on
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.
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 with, one of the reasons to evaluate
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 by means of examination is to deliver a peaceful mind to read their
subjects
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. If
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 are
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, they could be able to perform very well in exams, which
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inturn
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in turn
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 assist them to excel in their academics.
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a survey
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 conducted in
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 has proved that stress plays a pivotal role in degrading
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 performances.
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, examinations yield the
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 with enough time to prepare
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subjects
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 that could aid them a better understanding of
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.
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, exams could provide a soothing environment that would help them to concentrate on
subjects
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 effectively.
On the other hand
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, some
students
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 may get bored of reading without any regular assessments. In contemporary times, the
pupils
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 are immensely attracted to the things which keep them excited as games. When schools provide surplus time to study without any motivation or thrill elements,
students
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 would take it as
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an easy
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 one and does not read properly. To illustrate,
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a study
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 conducted by a teacher committee showed that on
comparision
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comparison
 with continual assessment nearly 30%
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pupils
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of pupils
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 performance has reduced significantly due to the grams.So, that would impose huge risk in the development of a country in all professional sectors in future.
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,
pupils
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 assessed by examination may pose
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a
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 obstacle to them in
acheiving
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achieving
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eventhough
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even though
 there are some merits of conducting examinations rather than regular tests , the demerit of
pupils
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 careless behaviour towards their
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outweights
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outweighs
 the benefits
ofexams
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of exams
.
Hence
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, continual valuation is more beneficial when compared with periodic evaluation.
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