More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is very common to move from
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country
to another for a better opportunity. However
, some people
think that serving your own country
is better than giving benefits to the other one
. Due to the fact that income and lifestyle is the main reason people
moved to the
rich countries.
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Nevertheless
, it is indeed not a good thing for a country
from where all the young talent is moving out. Evidently
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people
who go to another country
must have good experience and skills that they got this
opportunity to work there and which results into only average people
leave behind. For example
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has their own need and think of their own profit and to fulfil that, people
are migrating to the other part of the world.Submitted by brijal_desai on
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