More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is very common to move from
one
country
to another for a better opportunity.
However
, some
people
think that serving your own
country
is better than giving benefits to the other
one
. Due to the fact that income and lifestyle is the main reason
people
moved to
the
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rich countries. Studying and working overseas is the latest trend. Every upper middle class and rich
people
have the same goal to study abroad and settle there. Persons who
cant
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affrod
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afford
the
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education,
they
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opt for
the
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job prospects. It is quite easy to look for a job globally from your home and with just
one
click you can apply. There are so many agencies
who
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can help you get
ajob
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a job
overseas and provide you
a
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work visa.
Nevertheless
, it is indeed not a good thing for a
country
from where all the young talent is moving out.
Evidently
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people
who go to another
country
must have good experience and skills that they got
this
opportunity to work there and which results into only average
people
leave behind.
For example
, if 70% qualified
people
will go from
the
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one
country
, the future of that
country
would be not very bright. On other hand, a
country
like Canada,
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invites 4 million skilled workers every two years globally and evidently it is
one
of the rich countries.
Although
,
peopel
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people
are well aware of the situation that their nation needs them more than
the
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another
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one
. The main cause of earning in foreign currency is that the pay scale in their own
country
is not adequate to afford the kid's education and to have a lavish lifestyle.
Moreover
,
foreign
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government provides
number
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of
benifits
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benefits
to the
foriegn
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foreign
workers and permanent residents in their
country
.
For instance
, Canada provides free health insurance and free education in
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government
school
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schools
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for kids. In conclusion,
every
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one
has their own need and think of their own profit and to fulfil that,
people
are migrating to the other part of the world.
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