Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solution.

Smoking is an expensive habit among the youngsters which pollutes the environment

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smoker

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health

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affects tremendously. Nowadays,

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trend

is become

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becomes

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popular among

teen

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teens

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.

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essay discusses what causes

of

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this

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troubles and gives some curable

remedy

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for the following reasons. Smoking is always a

dengerous

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dangerous

crisis and there are some

troubke

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trouble

troubles

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, One of the main problems is

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can stimulate many

health

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illness

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such

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as Lung cancer, Heart problem for

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smoker

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, not only affects an active

smoker

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but

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affects the passive

smoker

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too. Another crisis is countless folks are addicted to using

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cigarette

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cigarettes

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because

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gives some kind of

drug like

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Nictotine

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Nicotine

,

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, many teens are using an enormous quantity.

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, a recent report by WHO said that more than 80% of the teens are affected by smoking

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cigarette

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cigarettes

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who developed nations because these countries have more winter season than summer,

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, they

smoking

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smoke

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tremendously even five pockets

in

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daily. There are some possible solutions

of

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for

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reducing

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trend, One of the main remedies is the ministry should be increased the tax rate on

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a cigarette

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cigarette

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cigarettes

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in order to

buying

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tobacco quantity might be

reducing

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reduced

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by the smokers.

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,

Australia

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Australian

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governments have already increased the tax amount on

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a cigarette

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cigarette

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cigarettes

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,

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, their citizens buying that product ratio reduces

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means they will be lived healthily. Another possible solution is the ruling party should be creating

the

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awareness about the side effects of smoking

oftenly

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often

since school days,

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, they cannot think about it, These

reemdies

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remedies

can be solved

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crisis. To conclude, smoking is like a slow poison,

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can affect our

health

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slow-by slow. Addiction and will

brings

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many

health

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issues

is

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are

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the reasons for

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trend.

Increase

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the duty amount on tobacco and will create

the

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apply

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awareness is the possible solution

of

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to

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this

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. In my

opinnion

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opinion

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, the youngsters should not

used

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use

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any kind of tobacco and they must be given more attention

on

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to

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their

health

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.