Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solution.
Smoking is an expensive habit among the youngsters which pollutes the environment
as well as
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, as well as smoker health,
smoker
health
affects tremendously. Nowadays, this
trend is become
popular among Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
teen
. Fix the agreement mistake
teens
This
essay discusses what causes of
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apply
this
troubles and gives some curable Correct determiner usage
these
remedy
for the following reasons.
Smoking is always a Fix the agreement mistake
remedies
dengerous
crisis and there are some Correct your spelling
dangerous
troubke
of Correct your spelling
trouble
troubles
this
, One of the main problems is this
can stimulate many health
illness
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illnesses
such
as Lung cancer, Heart problem for smoker
, not only affects an active Add an article
a smoker
the smoker
smoker
but also
affects the passive smoker
too. Another crisis is countless folks are addicted to using cigarette
because Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
this
gives some kind of drug like
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drug-like
Nictotine
, Correct your spelling
Nicotine
thus
, many teens are using an enormous quantity. For example
, a recent report by WHO said that more than 80% of the teens are affected by smoking cigarette
who developed nations because these countries have more winter season than summer, Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
hence
, they smoking
tremendously even five pockets Wrong verb form
smoke
in
daily.
There are some possible solutions Change preposition
apply
of
reducing Change preposition
for
this
trend, One of the main remedies is the ministry should be increased the tax rate on Add an article
a cigarette
the cigarette
cigarette
in order to Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
buying
tobacco quantity might be Change the verb
buy
reducing
by the smokers. Change the form of the verb
reduced
For instance
, Australia
governments have already increased the tax amount on Correct your spelling
Australian
Add an article
a cigarette
the cigarette
cigarette
, Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
consequently
, their citizens buying that product ratio reduces this
means they will be lived healthily. Another possible solution is the ruling party should be creating the
awareness about the side effects of smoking Correct article usage
apply
oftenly
since school days, Correct your spelling
often
therefore
, they cannot think about it, These reemdies
can be solved Correct your spelling
remedies
this
crisis.
To conclude, smoking is like a slow poison, this
can affect our health
slow-by slow. Addiction and will brings
many Change the verb form
bring
health
issues is
the reasons for Change the verb form
are
this
trend. Increase
the duty amount on tobacco and will create Wrong verb form
Increasing
the
awareness is the possible solution Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
to
this
. In my opinnion
, about Correct your spelling
opinion
this
, the youngsters should not used
any kind of tobacco and they must be given more attention Change the verb form
use
on
their Change preposition
to
health
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