These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages.
Mobile
phones
are the best devices to communicate information to any part of the globe. Now-a-days
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Nowadays
smart
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smartphones
phones
has
been equipped with Change the verb form
have
internet
facility, that
has made them more efficient and easy to perform many dedicated tasks than it was in Correct pronoun usage
which
last
decade . In Correct article usage
the last
next
few paragraphs, Correct article usage
the next
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shall explain the advantages and how it will Change the capitalization
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outweight
its disadvantages.
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outweigh
Smart
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Smartphones
phones
was
manufactured with 3G and 4G technology that Change the verb form
were
give
them Change the verb form
gives
access
to internet
world, through which many complex works can be performed, which earlier require physical presence. Add an article
the internet
Moreover
, many activities like payment of school fees, grocery items, watching live football matches as well as access
to stock markets earlier require to
physical visits to these facilities. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, internet
access
on the mobile phones
has changed the complete dimension of the way activities are performed earlier, by using paytm
and credit cards payment can be undertaken via bank account transfer, as well as Change the capitalization
Paytm
resatuarant
food items, grocery, electronic as well as any household things can Correct your spelling
restaurant
be order
via electronics platforms. According to Change the verb form
be ordered
reasearch
, conducted by Amazon.com in the year 2019, it was found thatCorrect your spelling
research
,
General public ordering items online is Remove the comma
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steep
rise from 10% in 2014 to 40% in 2019 and their satisfaction and experience Add an article
a steep
also
improved. Hence
, smart mobiles with access
to internet
data can make life easy and hassle free
.
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hassle-free
Biggest
disadvantage of using Add an article
The biggest
access
of
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to
internet
on electronic devices is thatCorrect article usage
the internet
,
they can Remove the comma
apply
exploited
by Change the verb form
be exploited
frausters
by the way of Correct your spelling
fraudsters
illegally
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illegal
access
of them through hacking and fishing. Hackers can easily reach victim devices and take control of it. Hence
can perform online shopping, transfer funds or sell shares. Furthermore
, Every year Millions of worth of money is stolen in an illegal way and converted to virtual money like bitcoins and money laundering.
To conclude, advantages
of using Correct article usage
the advantages
mobile
phone with Correct article usage
a mobile
internet
underweight its disadvantages because Correct article usage
the internet
majority
of people can perform all activities smoothly and efficiently without human interface and delay. Add an article
the majority
a majority
Hence
advantages of using it is
more than its disadvantages.Change the verb form
are
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...