Question: Universities should accept equal number of males and females in every subject. To what extent do you agree?

There is no doubt that these days the topic of

gender

equality became soo trendy that

itself

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has affected the admission's process;

therefore

, admission's

officer

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officers

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started

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tostarted

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give

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giving

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the same acceptance rate for

both

of

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genders

.

This

essay agrees that

both

of

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the

undergraudate

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undergraduate

and

postgraudate

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postgraduate

programs should have a policy that

give

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gives

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the same

chance

for

both

genders

.

Firstly

,

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it itself

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itself

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it

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will make us

civcivilaized

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a civcivilaized

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society and

secondly

,

this

policy will make the

campus

more

diversived

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diverse

diversified

. There are

many

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development

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developments

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for the topic of

gender

equality and these days

ourselves

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we

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saw it in

the

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apply

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campus

life.

Therefore

, Admission's

officer

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officers

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started to give more attention for

equalize

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equalizing

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classes which itself will make

campus

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the campus

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more civcivilaized. To be honest,

Myself

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I

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believe that the

frist

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first

step to

become

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becoming

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a civil society is to give

both

gender

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genders

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the same job even if it was working in

police

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the police

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. Life showed us many

example

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examples

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that we should give

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a woman

the woman

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woman

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women

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a

chance

.

For example

, who created the Astrozenca-

Oxfoad

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Oxford

vaccine is a woman; if

ourself

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we

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did not give her a

chance

, I do not believe that that vaccine will

be exist

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exist

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.

On the other hand

, it has been proven that diversity

create

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creates

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different outcomes. The idea that there is no female on the

campus

might lower the overall discussion in the class. Sometimes during

any

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an

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argument

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it would be helpful that

both

of

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genders

are present.

Moreover

,

this

might make society more peaceful due to the

familiarizton

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familiarization

familiarity

between

both

of

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apply

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genders

. In conclusion, the policy of

gender

equality will reinforce

the

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civil behaviour and will more the

campus

more

diversived

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diverse

diversified

.

Myself

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I

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believe that giving the same

chance

for

both

of

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genders

is a healthy perspective.