Some people think that only those people who have worked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position. Do you agree?

Promotion

is the most significant aspect for each and every human working period due to increase the positions and increase the wages too.

However

, some think that an

experinece

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experience

cab only

stimulate

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to

promoted

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to

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a senior

position

. In my opinion about

this

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I strongly disagree with

this

statement because there are some other reasons

can

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provoke

such

as Talent and academic qualification.

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essay discusses in detail

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the following reasons.

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with, there are some alternatives

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that can

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promote to

a

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next

level in working place who the employers. Undoubtedly, If a person has

an enormous skills

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about

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a

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work, he certainly will get

promotion

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by

a

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employer even he has a few years

experience

. Taking Sundar Pichai

for example

, he

promoted

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was promoted

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to vice president of Google in 2012, two years later he has promoted again as a CEO of Google.

This

company has more

experience

workers, even though, they decided to

gave

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a higher

position

to Sundar due to he has more talent than others.

Obviously

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an

experience

is not only is the main reason for promoting

next

level.

Moreover

, education qualification is

the

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another

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causes

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for will triggers in

higher

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position

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.

In other words

, a new fresher has more wisdom about the new technology and Business

stratergy

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strategy

,

therefore

,he will

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get

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be get

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beget

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a higher

position

.

For instance

, many corporate companies always invite the fresh mind without

have

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any

experience

because

theswe

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these

persons only

has

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up-dated

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mind.

In addition

, nowadays everything is fully digitalized, young workers can be worked

efficiency

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to

compared

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experience

blood.

Hence

, working long years only cannot get

promotion

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a promotion

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. To conclude,

promotion

is a good reward for each employee and

this

can only

provides

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satisfaction. Skills and education qualification

also

contributes the main role for getting

promotion

in a

work place

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workplace

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.

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the

above mentioned

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details. I believe each and every person will be gotten

promotion

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a promotion

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when they have more skills and knowledge.