Some people think that only those people who have worked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position. Do you agree?
Promotion
is the most significant aspect for each and every human working period due to increase the positions and increase the wages too. However
, some think that an experinece
cab only Correct your spelling
experience
stimulate
to Change the verb form
stimulates
promoted
Replace the word
promotion
to
a senior Change preposition
of
position
. In my opinion about this
I strongly disagree with Add a comma
,this
this
statement because there are some other reasons can
provoke Correct pronoun usage
that can
such
as Talent and academic qualification. This
essay discusses in detail for
the following reasons.
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apply
To begin
with, there are some alternatives can
promote to Correct pronoun usage
that can
a
Correct article usage
the
next
level in working place who the employers. Undoubtedly, If a person has an enormous skills
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enormous skills
an enormous skill
about
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in
a
work, he certainly will get Remove the article
apply
promotion
by Add an article
a promotion
the promotion
a
employer even he has a few years Change the article
an
experience
. Taking Sundar Pichai for example
, he promoted
to vice president of Google in 2012, two years later he has promoted again as a CEO of Google. Add a missing verb
was promoted
This
company has more experience
workers, even though, they decided to gave
a higher Change the verb
give
position
to Sundar due to he has more talent than others. Obviously
an Add a comma
,Obviously
experience
is not only is the main reason for promoting next
level.
Moreover
, education qualification is the
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apply
another
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other
causes
for will triggers in Fix the agreement mistake
cause
higher
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a higher
the higher
position
. Fix the agreement mistake
positions
In other words
, a new fresher has more wisdom about the new technology and Business stratergy
, Correct your spelling
strategy
therefore
,he will Change the verb form
get
be get
a higher Correct your spelling
beget
position
. For instance
, many corporate companies always invite the fresh mind without have
any Change the verb form
having
experience
because theswe
persons only Correct your spelling
these
has
Change the verb form
have
up-dated
mind. Add an article
an up-dated
In addition
, nowadays everything is fully digitalized, young workers can be worked efficiency
to Replace the word
efficiently
compared
Wrong verb form
compare
experience
blood. Hence
, working long years only cannot get promotion
.
To conclude, Add an article
a promotion
the promotion
promotion
is a good reward for each employee and this
can only provides
satisfaction. Skills and education qualification Change the verb form
provide
also
contributes the main role for getting promotion
in a work place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
Therefore
, I strongly disagree with this
statement in the above mentioned
details. I believe each and every person will be gotten Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
promotion
when they have more skills and knowledge.Correct article usage
a promotion
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