Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is thought by some to be a useful method to tie
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together from different ranges of
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and traditions. In my opinion, I agree that
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can connect
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regardless of their
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or culture since there is no one who doesn’t like
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. On the one hand , there are a number of
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that
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being
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is a bridge between differences of cultures and
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, the crucial
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it is being
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universal language. There is no language barrier when it comes to
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.
In other words
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,
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tend to enjoy
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foreign songs even though they don’t eventually understand
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meaning
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.
For example
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, Korean songs,
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known as the
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pop
industry, are popular around the world by their catchy tunes and their performance.
As a result
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, their cultures and traditional foods have been automatically promoted among their international fans. Another possible reason
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connecting
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by using
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is that it never grows old.To be precise, there are tons of famous songs from over decades that become viral among youngsters these days over the internet
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as tik
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, Facebook or sometimes by playing as OST (Original Soundtrack) of the films.
For instance
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, the hit song called "Can't Help Falling In Love" by Elvis Presley from 1961 made its return in 2020 after it was played as the original soundtrack in the popular film "Friend Zone" . In conclusion, there is no doubt that
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can erase all the barriers between
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and culture since it is a universal language and never grows old.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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